Second treatment

As we looked back to our treatment we noticed there were a few restrictions such as finding the abandoned house so we took it upon ourselves to watch a few paranormal horror films to get more inspiration such as  Paranormal Activity, The Conjuring and One Missed Call and we realised that these films are set in normal houses yet are still scary. Therefore we have changed the setting of our trailer to be in a normal house but still keep the same plot near enough.

We are also thinking of adding a basement scene where most of the scary, paranormal things happen. In the basement is where the characters will find the old TV screen under a dust sheet and see their friend that is trapped in another room.

In the room that the friend is trapped in, we will film that bit from a high angle to resemble a CCTV camera. In addition to this, I think it would be a good idea to add a doll or something creepy looking in the trapped room and it will have a curse on it and it'll make the friend in the trapped room possessed.

Scary things happen in the basement - gets really cold (talk among themselves thinking a spirit/ghost is present). They eventually find a key under a box, open the door and see the friend sitting in the corner rocking back and forth (same as original treatment). Possessed friend starts screaming and acting reckless. Another friend looks into the room and sees the doll, picks it up, looks at it in the eyes and then from behind the first possessed friend grabs them.

End of film, the screen cuts to a message saying 'I told you not to go in there.'